not sure
Not sure what to think of this.
Initially, I liked where you were going and would have been ok with the intro being so long if not feeling a bit let down at the "build up".
Other than that, I liked that you were shooting for something different. I would suggest putting a bass track next time and maybe some melody in the back when you get towards the end of the "build up".
But that is just my opinion.
Overall 8