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not sure

Not sure what to think of this.
Initially, I liked where you were going and would have been ok with the intro being so long if not feeling a bit let down at the "build up".

Other than that, I liked that you were shooting for something different. I would suggest putting a bass track next time and maybe some melody in the back when you get towards the end of the "build up".

But that is just my opinion.

Overall 8

soulmasking responds:

Hey that's what a reviews for, to let me know what you think. I agree the song does feel a bit "different". For the song itself, I'm not sure I'd agree with a bass track, as I like static, and silence in my songs, but, I will keep it in mind. I do, however, understand what you mean by adding in a background melody for the "build-up". I will keep all your recommendations in mind, for future projects. Thanks for your review, and glad you took the time to let me know your opinion.

Carpunch

interesting

The melody was interesting. The voice saying the same thing over and over got annoying.
Personally, I think the deep voice effect is played out. If you're going to keep the voice, maybe do it up one time in the beginning and then ditch it.

Other than that, lucky seven.

Bleek989 responds:

thx man naw the voice is so ppl dont steal it off here and show there firends and be lyke ay this is mine, and sell it and get money..:) i dont post alot on here anymore really, im startin to stop cuz im makin money off muzik now...(nuthin huge lol) so cant have all my shit on here for free and then be sellin it too...ya kno

Vocals

Personally, I'm into hip hop for the mind, so I have to give you props on the principle that you put up a positive message.
As far as the loop/beat, I wasn't feeling it... felt like I should have been at wedding or something but that's OK - someone else might think it's great.
The vocals need to be recorded better. It sounded like you were wettin' the mic(too close)and you might want to put just a tiny-tiny amount of reverb or something.

Broken-Needle responds:

aight man thanks for the advice, da beat was hard to make cuz i asked sorta too specificaly, but I improvised by making it feel like I'm teaching a class, da mic ye I prolly did put it a little too close next time I'll keep it far away, anyway man thanks for da constructive review, 5, i think dl and thanks for not hating,
Save the bees,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

7s

I like what you were shooting for but kinda felt like it could been a bit more "different". The mix was decent other then the gain was in the red on the drum track for most of the song.

Keep plugin away you have pretty good stuff in there.

Paroxym responds:

Dont know what you mean by more "different " but thanks on the review.

This mix is better

I like this mix preferrably over the other one. My ears were stinging a bit from the snare/hi-hat portions on the other mix. Good job on the fix. Nice tempo/feel. I think it would be neat if in the beginning when you're panning the track maybe you have the pan follow the tempo a little faster. That's just my thought but that's what makes makes us all unique artist! Good Job! BTW what are you using to compose ur tracks?

p4c responds:

im using my impulsive imagination, and reason. ty for the review!

and in response to the response to the review i gave you [lol], ill try playing it on my bros speakers some time. ive been using headphones as of now, ill see if it makes a difference.

I enjoy drawing, writing and composing music. My music is for my sole entertainment and personal expression. I write and perform my own music. Altho' I wouldn't mind collaborating or putting my artwork and music to good use. PM me if interested.

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